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i wrote this assignment and my professor give me some notes to fix it and complete the assignment.

this is what my professor said :

Have you looked at the “originality report” on turnitin.com?  If you have not, you need to.  Log back in to the site and click on the rectangular, green icon that has the number 7% in it.  This will bring up a version of your paper that has highlighted everything that turnitin found to be “matching.”  Having things match is not a problem, but having them match and not be properly quoted and cited *is*.  Remember, I’m not so much concerned about the raw percentage, but more about the nature of what matches.

On your second to last page you have a quote that is not cited.  Where did it come from?  A quote must be cited.  You do not cite anything in the entire paper.  You do have a few of URLs listed, at least one of which is not reachable.  Given that it’s not reachable, how did you use it?

You have no “Works Cited” page.  What are your sources?

This is not a paper, it’s a list of bullet points.  It should be presented as a research paper, as text, with citations.  Don’t treat it as a presentation, especially not as a technical presentation.  Remember, the focus of the paper is the social, legal and ethical issues involved with handling software quality.  Technical aspects can be briefly discussed, but they should not be the focus of the paper.

If you were to properly cite the quote and properly cite and quote the other sections that are verbatim from your sources I would accept the paper, but if it were still the same paper with only those things fixed you would get a very low grade.  This is an opportunity for you to do a rewrite and maybe improve that grade.

These problems are pretty major, but without them being fixed, this paper is *not* acceptable.  I won’t assess you a lateness penalty if you can give me a revised paper by Monday, November 9 or earlier.  Please make your changes and submit them as a revision on turnitin.com. Do not submit it in the same slot as before, use a different “revision assignment.” *Look* at the report before you bring me the revised paper — you may want to revise it again if necessary.  The main reason I require you to use turnitin.com is so *you* can see the report and fix any problems that it shows.

i need it after 18 hrs pleasa