writing activity 3
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Professor comments from Writing Activity 2 below:
Feedback to Learner8/13/18 12:48 PM
Willie,
I am so pleased to know that putting your ideas down on paper (or computer) is no problem. As you revise your work, I would encourage you to look at your paragraphs to see what might need developing or editing. This first body paragraph looks really good. Although your introduction is also good, you might be able to add another sentence or two to bring it all together. Great work overall!
Please see my embedded comments on the assignment itself.
Although this looks really great, in an outline, if there is an A, then there must be a B. If there’s a 1, then there must be a 2. It can never be just one point listed.
Paragraph one: This is great background information for your introduction. You can even expound on this further.
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